This is a tribute to all my friends " ALL" - the dps ones especiallly------
and , what could Ayush Rai have written to jot out His Thanks to you......................
Yup u got it right................ the same thing which i have been writing since class 4. The same thing which has echoed in every assembly( or nearly every assembly) in DPS since class 7
Especial thanks( that too with a capital "E" ) to Siddhant Bharadwaj , who has been listening to all my rubbish poems and tantrums and till today praising them unflinchingly( salute to your patience , hehe) .
And , My Sincere Gratitude to Rajni Ma'am, Aruna Ma'am And the best Ever ----- "Yeshwant Sir" for appreciating my every aspect even when i wrote the worst................... Sir , ( if u ever read this) remember the first poem of mine u read?? "The War Within" , after all criticism from Indrani Ma'm , U were the one who brought a smile back..............
chalo bohot paka dia hoga maine non-dipsites ko.................hehe
but still....................
here we go!
"
'Tis a little knot in the eyes
Like a blossoming flower
Remember the Sun - The hyaline
And those , who left the hours...........
Lie low like a faded flower
At the back of our minds
Its tree has lost the leaves
But, still the aroma one finds.
Will I be back again
under the shade of the same shining Sun ,
Will the garden be the same
For the Rustling Leaves to come.....................
"
This Poem is not completed yet; for a poem like this, there is no end...
Its the depiction - A Potrayal - of memories , of times that we spent together , hand in hand, laughing , crying , playing , fighting - all "Together"
And , the memories are so vast that mind cannot unfold at one go..................
This aint a poem whose purpose is to make u cry remembering the bygone days......
It wants to see its readers smile , smile at the thought that they actually lived a life in that enriched ambience of Love , Care And Affection--------- Cheers To It...
Because-
" Life is a dew amidst the hail "
Love You All
Yours
Ayush
thnx for the compliment ..
ReplyDeletedo u remember wat rajni maam said the day she went ..."ayush i will never forget the poems"..and i think its true ..haha ..as far as i can remember i have been having fun listening to ur poems since a long way back ..remember once in assembly i had to read news and u had to read out ur poem ..and i tried to make u change the poem u were reading smthng like "search ur herat ...u will find a cart ..n a silver rod ....smthng smthng god"..
this poem is a very nice one dude ..keep it up !
waiting for more!!
nice as it already is.. i just wanted to continue a little(howvever, my context my differe a little ).. hope u dont mind that..
ReplyDeletea question always arises in my mind..
the garden,will i ever find..
where peace was my consort..
and every breath gave a comfort...
a question arises in my mind..
the garden, will i ever find...
ignore that last e in differe.. i hate to mistake when it comes to speelings.. )
ReplyDeletehehe..... nice 1 ; i wud be seriously grateful to all who cud extend this poem in their own individualistic ways!!!!!
ReplyDeletei still smile wen i go back
ReplyDeleteto the memories of those days
wen the laughter was crazy
and the smile stays
the fun in those moments
will never be lost
whenever u feel sad
just watch ur smiling ghost!
@siddhaint:last ki do line ki jagah kuch aur likho
ReplyDeletecan i help woth those last lines..
ReplyDeletewhenever you feel sad
remember the good days you had..
yea thts k anagha
ReplyDeletehehe.. alright..
ReplyDelete